साँसें चल रही है तो उम्मीद अभी भी बाकी है।
हारी नहीं हूँ मैं, कोशिश अभी भी जारी है।
माना कि मुश्किलों भरी है राह मेरी और तूफानों का दौर है,
पर ढिगा नहीं है विश्वास मेरा, जंग अभी भी जारी है।
फिर उठूँगी गिर कर भी मैं, लड़खड़ाते क़दमों से भी,
कोई हो ना हो साथ मेरे पर ज़िन्दगानी अभी भी बाकी है।
भले ही जल गई हो लकड़ियाँ मेरे चूल्हे की,
पर उनकी राख अभी भी बाकी है।
जख्म हरे कर जाते है कुछ घाव पुराने भी,
आँखों में नमी हो भले ही पर होठों पर मुस्कान अभी भी बाकी है।
©®दीपिका
सुनिये पॉडकास्ट पर!
https://anchor.fm/deepika-mishra/episodes/Umeed-Abhi-Bhi-Baki-Hai-ebf502
हौसला देती बहुत ही खूबसूरत रचना।👌👌
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बहुत धन्यवाद मधुसुदन जी😊
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जज़्बा कमाल का है
Beautiful
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Thank you so much for appreciation😊
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I really love the way you play with words…it’s important to keep trying …koshishe hi kamyab hoti hai
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Thanks for the appreciation!
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I always like your poetry, it has content.
We must keep trying as we never know which try will make us succeed.
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Very true! Thank you so much for appreciating my poem.
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Yes this was a fantastic and motivating read. Something we all need to read and get inspired
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Thank you so much, Now you can listen to the podcast too.
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How beautifully you express what every woman go through during their life. Very well written
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Thank you so much dear! Now you can listen to the podcast too of my poetries.
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Lovely poem. We need to make an effort to live or lives peacefully
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Thanks dear
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Inspiring and uplifting poem. You weaved it very beautifully. फिर उठूँगी गिर कर भी मैं, लड़खड़ाते क़दमों से भी,
कोई हो ना हो साथ मेरे पर ज़िन्दगानी अभी भी बाकी है। So true. We need to stay strong from within.
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Thank you so much Alpana for appreciating the poem😇
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Deepika, you have expressed the will power of woman beautifully in this poetry. There are many instances in life where we need to self motivate.
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Thanks Meenal, I am happy you liked it 😊
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Such amazing poetry you write I really admire your writing in Hindi I also love writing in Hindi poems but somehow get short of words
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Thank you so much dear😊
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This proves how strong a woman can be of she plans to do something. She doesn’t need anyone but only her inner strength. Beautifully written
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Thanks a lot Jhilmil😊
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This proves how strong a woman can be of she plans to do something. She doesn’t need anyone but only her inner strength. Beautifully written !
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Thanks a lot Jhilmil😊
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This is such a nice motivating read. Loved your lines and thoughts behind them.
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Thanks a lot😊
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Deepika… love the way this poem inspires to keep moving on and keep fighting…Such an inspiring read
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Thank you so much dear😊 You can also listen to the poems on podcast.
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That’s so true. We might fall down but we never lose until we stop trying. Koshish karna hamara kaam hai.
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Bilkul! Koshish karti rahni chahiye
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Koshish and hope are two reserves that should never run out and what keep us going. Thoughtful words, Deepika.
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Thanks Mayuriji
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