भरी भीड़ में भी जो तन्हाईयाँ ढूंढ़ता है, वो मेरा अक़्स ही तो है जो एक मनपसंद आईना ढूंढ़ता है।
शायद उसको आदत हो गई है खुद ही कहकर खुद ही सुनने की,पर फिर भी हर दूसरे पल आहट पर बंद दरवाजा खोलता है।
भरी भीड़ में भी जो तन्हाईयाँ ढूंढ़ता है, वो मेरा अक़्स ही तो है जो एक मनपसंद आईना ढूंढ़ता है।
वो क्या समझेगा गुमनामी को उसकी?जो खुद गुमशुदा होकर अपना नाम पता पूछता है।
भरी भीड़ में भी जो तन्हाईयाँ ढूंढ़ता है, वो मेरा अक़्स ही तो है जो एक मनपसंद आईना ढूंढ़ता है।
चाहत को उसकी समझना इतना भी आसां नहीं है। जो ना आँखों से, ना ही शब्दों से अपना गम बयां करता है।
भरी भीड़ में भी जो तन्हाईयाँ ढूंढ़ता है, वो मेरा अक़्स ही तो है जो एक मनपसंद आईना ढूंढ़ता है।
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बेहतरीन पंक्तियां
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बहुत धन्यवाद😊
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हर दूसरे पल आहट पर एक दरवाजा खोलता है। बहुत बेहतर!
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Thank you so much Sonia😊
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I really loved the way you explained the real meaning of this loneliness
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Thanks Ruchie for reading.
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Wow this is an awesome poem. Keep them coming.
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Thank you so much dear😊
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woooow. reading the title, I thought of Gulzar sahab first. 🙂 Hum Akbar breed me phi thud ko tanahan pesos kite hai. IS kavita ne un sab jasbaton ko bayaan kiya hai….
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I love Urdu words and the feel if Urdu is awesome. Thanks for appreciating my poem.
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Lovely poem and very well worded. You have great command over the language
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Thanks a lot Neha😊
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How beautiful every word and phrase it, got me to dive deeper and deeper!
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I am glad you liked this. Thanks for reading.
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You have a way with such free flowing lines and meaningful poems. It is lovely.
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Thanks Dipika😊
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Ekdam umda panktiya likhi he apne..bahot sundar. Keep writing.. 👍
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Thanks Pinal😊
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Loved your first line…. Bhari bheed mein Jo tanhaiyan dhoondta hai…. Nicely worded poem
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Thanks a lot Sakshi😊
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Beautiful lines with deep meaning. Reading your poems are so delightful
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Thank you so much! Means a lot😊
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Well the present generation I feel is very lonely.. the poem fits each one of us in some capacity.
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Yeah! Sometimes.
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You write very good heartfelt poems. I liked reading this one.
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Thanks dear!
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Beautiful lines, Deepika. Sometimes we look for company in loneliness and sometimes we want to be left alone.
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Yeah! True.
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Very apt said in poetry, sometimes a person feel so lonely, no one to share thoughts.
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Thanks Meenal😊
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Loneliness is common these days and the fact is that we don’t share or express it just keep it beneath in our heart and mind.
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We should express our feelings.
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Wow in love with these lines. Easily relatable in the rush of life. Very well written, crisp and inspiring
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Thank you such dear😊
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you are an amazing writer, love how beautiful express everything in words. this is absolutely surreal
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Thanks a lot Jhilmil😊 For your kind words.
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