ना जाने क्यूँ आज सब कुछ धुआँ धुआँ सा लग रहा है।
अश्क दरियां सी और मन सागर सा भरा लग रहा है।
ऐसा नहीं है कि हम जानते नहीं उन्हें,
पर फिर भी न जाने क्यूँ उनके सजदे में ये सिर झुक रहा है?
सोच की गहराइयों पर भी उनका कब्ज़ा है,
ख्याबों की उड़ान पर भी कोई अनदेखा पहरा है।
फिर भी सब जानते हुए भी ये दिल गुस्ताख़ी कर रहा है।
बदल जायेगे वो हर पल ये इबादत कर रहा है।
इसी उम्मीद में कि शायद एक दिन वो समझ जायेगें,
और इस वीराने में भी उम्मीदों के फूल अपनी खुशबू फैलायेगे।
Beautiful
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Thanks a lot Girija😊
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Wlcm dear
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😇😇
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Stay connected!
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This is so well written and explained, i like how you have expressed the meaning of the word so beautifully and artistically. Its so well penned.
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Thank you so much for appreciation!
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Beautiful as always Deepika. So much depth of emotion.
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Thanks dear😊
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The only one word on which this entire universe exist “UMEED” you have expressed this beautifully!!
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Thanks Ruchie😊
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Mera dil baghban ho gaya. Lovely and well written
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Thanks Anu😊
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Gems from your blog Deepika. I don’t have words to write here as everything will look dhundhla infront of these amazing lines.
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Means a lot Dipika😊 Thank you so much!
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Kitni pyari kavita h 🙂 padh k mann he khush ho gaya ❤
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Thanks Snehal😊
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kya baat hai, dil ko chho jati hai aapki kavita. umeed hai aap aise hi likhte rahe hum padhte rahe
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Thank you so much Gurjeet! Means a lot😇
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Beautiful words as always Deepika. You are gifted behen.
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Thanks dear😊
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Hope is a beautiful word.It’s a powerful soul food.Thank you for sharing such a nice poem.
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Thanks😊
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It’s a wonderful poem Deepika. I must mention I really have to appreciate that you took time to translate this for me to understand. Really touched.
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Thanks dear😊
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OMG felt like reading a song or gazal. Beautifully written dear.
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Thank you so much! A big compliment for me.😇
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Beautifully penned emotional poetry Dipika. One suggestion, you can split the poem in paras, so that it gains more readability.
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Ok, I will keep in mind. Thanks for the suggestion dear😊
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Beautiful as always, Deepika. One can only hope and keep it alive.
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Thanks Varsha😊True!
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As they say Umeed par duniya kayam hai…everything is so beautiful in this poem
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Bilkul! Umeed jeene ka Sahara hai.
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Deepika, hope (Umeed) is something we all live by and in fact, I guess that is one thing that gives us the motivation to go ahead in life. I really loved your take on this word Umeed.
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Thanks a lot, Rakhi😊 Bilkul sahi! Umeed pe to hi duniya kaayam hai.
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Your writings have so much depth. I love the way you write.
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Thanks Amy!
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Wow these are some deep thoughts channelised into a great poem.
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Thank you so much dear😊
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Bahut khoob
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Bahut his sundar, loved it.
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Thanks😊 What are you doing nowadays? I saw your clicked pictures whenever I get time.
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Keep visiting, reviews matters a lot and will love to know your views on my posts…
Presently busy with blog related works.
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Ok Sure! Best wishes for future projects.
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