ना करने के बहानें ढूंढों तो एक नहीं हज़ार मिल जाएगें।
और अगर करने जाओ तो छोटे छोटे तिनके भी रोड़े अटकायेगे।
तो क्या करे, हार मानकर बैठ जाए?
या झकझोरे अपने विश्वास को और सब भुलाकर आगे बढ़ते जाये।
रोज गिरे, रोज उठे पर मरने ना दें अपने एहसास को।
कर सकते है और हो भी जायेगा बस छोड़े अपने डर और डर से पैदा होने वाले हर अविश्वास को।
फिर यही रास्ता अपनी मंज़िल की राह खुद दिखलाएगा।
और आत्मविश्वास का सूरज हर अँधेरे को चीरता हुआ अपनी ही रोशनी से जगमगाएगा।
Thanks Justme & Vivek!
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Wah wah! Bahut khoob! Ab to bahane hi haar maankar baith jayenge..
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Thanks a lot for stopping by and for your motivational words.
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I’m hoping it’s a good one..let me start learning Hindi for you. Can you give me a short translation.
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Ok I will.
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Last ki line badi he motivational thi. M screenshot kr rkhi hu har bar khudko yaad dilane. Thanks dear! ❤
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My pleasure dear. Thanks for the compliment.
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A hear felt poem .It’s always an insightful read on your blog.
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Thank you so much Mam!
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Trust me I just love Hindi poems and this one is so inspiring…keep sharing such great poems !!
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Thank you so much, Ruchie🌸
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Kya khoob kahi hai! Beautiful message.
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Thanks dear!
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This is a very sweet and very motivational poem. Loved it. You write good Hindi poems.
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Thanks you so much for appreciation!
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Excellent dear, keep writing and inspiring everyone around you
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Thanks a lot dear😇
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bahane ko bhi sharam aa jaye, ab to bahane k pass koi bahana na bacha
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Wah! Wah! What an interpretation. loved this one💝
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Keep penning such beautiful poetry. Loved this.
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Thanks a lot dear😊
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Very inspiring lines Deepika, loved how you penned it.
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Thanks dear😊
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Amazing poem, So motivating and inspiring. I love the last phrase the lot.. Atmavishwas ka Suraj..
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Thanks a lot, Gunjan! I am glad you liked it.
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Wow Deepika! What a gem of a poem this is!
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Thank you so much! Do you like Hindi poetries?
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Honestly I don’t read too much in Hindi, but you are very expressive in Hindi, and it is a pleasure to read your poetry.
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Thank you so much for answering the question. I am glad that you are loving the efforts.
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Rukna jidgadi nahi, ladte rehna and chalte jaana hi jeevan hai. Bahut Khoob
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Thanks a lot, Dipika💝
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Absolutely beautiful. Keep up the great work
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So motivating.. so true. Excuses will always be there to stop. We need to rise above excuses,
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Yes, I feel, we do that most of the times. We cover up our mistakes with excuses.
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You writes well this is the best poem on Bahane I have ever read and I would really love to read each of your poem
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Oh! Big compliment for me. Thanks a lot, Neha 😊
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Beautifully Written!!can connect with each and every word of it!!👏👏
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Thanks Archana😊
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Loved the micro poetry Deepika, try to write longer ones they leave greater impact
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Ok, I will try. Thanks for the suggestion dear😊
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Waah… It’s absolutely amazing… Superb writeup.
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Thanks a lot😊
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This poem talks about the truth for bahane. Love the write up. Keep writing.
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Thanks Amrit😊
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जज्बा हो अगर कुछ गुजरने का तो रूकावटे भी हट ही जाती है
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Very true😊
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Very much positive one with the facts depicted very nicely through words.
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Means a lot Jyotirmoy! These positive comments give me a boost to write more. Thank you so much😊
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